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Book Review: A Monster Calls by Patrick Ness

May 4, 2024Journal, ReviewsE.S.O. Martin

In the shadowed corridors of grief and adolescence, Patrick Ness’s A Monster Calls stands as a beacon of raw emotional storytelling. Originally conceived by Siobhan Dowd during her final days, the novel is a poignant exploration of a child’s journey through loss, brought to life with the haunting illustrations of Jim Kay.

The Heart of the Story:

At its core, A Monster Calls is the tale of 13-year-old Connor O’Malley, who grapples with the impending loss of his mother to a terminal illness. Connor’s life is a battleground of internal and external conflicts—from the bullies at school to the turmoil at home, where neither his estranged father nor his rigid grandmother offer solace. Amidst this turmoil, Connor finds an unlikely confidant in a monstrous Yew tree that comes to life, weaving tales that blur the lines between moral fables and harsh realities.

A Journey Through Grief:

Ness masterfully navigates the labyrinth of Connor’s emotions, portraying a character who is at once vulnerable and resilient. The monster’s tales serve as a mirror to Connor’s psyche, revealing the complexities of human nature and the painful, often messy process of coming to terms with loss. The climax, where Connor confronts his deepest fear, is a cathartic release, a raw acknowledgment of the powerlessness and rage that accompanies grief.

The Power of Storytelling:

What sets this novel apart is its unflinching honesty in addressing the depth of a child’s emotions. Ness does not shy away from the dark and tumultuous; instead, he delves deep, presenting a narrative that is both harrowing and healing. The book’s acknowledgment that children can harbor profound grief and rage, and yet remain innocent, is a narrative feat that resonates deeply.

Jim Kay’s illustrations are more than mere accompaniments to the text; they are narratives in their own right. Stark, evocative, and beautifully unsettling, the artwork enhances the story’s emotional depth, making the monster and Connor’s journey all the more tangible.

A Monster Calls struck a chord with me for its unapologetic exploration of the darker facets of childhood. This novel, while a work of fiction, touches on universal truths about pain, loss, and healing. Grief and loss are too powerful to have to bear alone. If you, or someone you know, is hurting, please reach out to someone you trust for comfort and help.

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UPDATE — This blog post includes text and images generated with the assistance of OpenAI’s models. I provided detailed prompts, curated the outputs, and made edits, but the majority of the content was created with AI assistance. This disclosure aligns with my commitment to transparency under the EU AI Act. Disclosure added on November 18, 2024 to align with transparency requirements under the EU AI Act.

This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 4.0 International License. Portions of this content were generated using OpenAI’s models, with significant curation, editing, and creative input by E. S. O. Martin. AI-generated portions may not be subject to copyright under current laws.

Perun: God of Thunder and the Overworld

April 27, 2024Journal, Slavic Spirits (series)E.S.O. Martin

One God to Rule Them All?

In Slavic mythology, there are a variety of gods who are often defined as the “supreme god” in an attempt to shoehorn Slavic polytheism into the Christian monotheistic hierarchy. Each of the slavic tribal lands had their own favorite supreme God—from Perun, to Triglav, to Rod, to Svarog.

One of the favorite Supreme Gods was Perun, God of Thunder.

Perun, Slavic god of thunder, war, and the sky

Perun: God of Thunder and War

Perun was the god of thunder, of the sky, and of the overworld. He was a towering figure, embodying the roaring power of thunder and the fierce flash of lightning.

Perun was also the god of warriors and of war. He is often depicted wearing armor and preparing to go to war. Warriors would pray to him for protection.

Perun’s presence is felt in the rumbling of storm clouds and the strike of lightning that splits the sky.

Guardian of Order and Justice

One of Perun’s jobs was to maintain order in the cosmos, wielding authority over the earth, sky, and rain.

In the Creation by Diving myth, Veles needed Perun’s help to create land because Perun had the ability to bring order and structure to chaos.

Symbolism and Worship

The oak tree, revered for its strength and endurance, is sacred to Perun, symbolizing his connection to the World Tree and to the natural world.

While the Slavs did not necessarily build temples, they would gather beneath the canopy of ancient oaks, where they sought favor with the ancestors and with the gods through offerings, song, and rituals.

Perun’s weapon, the mighty ax or hammer, symbolized his warrior aspect, and his ability to bring justice and order to those beneath him, striking down chaos and evil with the force of thunderbolts.

Perun is also symbolized by the element of fire, which often accompanies lightning and thunder. He also favored the iris flower.

Perun’s favorite animal was the eagle, and he would often take this form as he flew through the clouds. It was also said that he had a giant eagle as his familiar.

Perun is often depicted as an eagle, perched in the crown of the world tree.

The Eternal Conflict

Perun is often depicted in a perpetual struggle against Veles, god of the underworld, waters, and trickery. The conflict represents the enternal battle between sky and earth, order and chaos, mirroring the natural cycle of storms that nourish the earth and then recede.

In artistic depictions of this conflict, Perun often takes the form of a giant eagle, while Veles takes the form of a dragon, or giant serpent. In this way, this is conflict is the Slavic equivalent of the the Christian struggle of St. George and the dragon.

Perun’s Family

In the beginning of the creation story, Perun is depicted as having been one of the consorts of the earth goddess Mokosh, who gave birth to two children, Jarilo and Marzanna. The Great Battle was sparked by Perun’s jealousy over realizing Mokosh had also been seeing Veles (Perun’s chief enemy) as her other consort.

Despite this, Perun claimed both Jarilo and Marzanna as his own children, and he made them welcome in the overworld. Jarilo, he treated as his golden child. Marzanna, as a beloved daughter.

Perun’s wife was the warrior rain goddess Dodola. She was sometimes called Perperuna or Perunitsa or Perunka, signifying her relationship with Perun. Theirs was a much more harmonious partnership than the one between Perun and Mokosh had been. Slavic peoples would sing songs and do rain dances to honor and worship both Dodola and Perun in hopes that they would bring rain to their crops during times of drought.

Unlike the gods of the Greek and Egyptian pantheon, who are all blood relatives to each other, the other main gods and goddesses in the Slavic pantheon all emerged at different times from the chaos of the cosmic egg, to represent different ideas or aspects of the natural world.

Svarog emerged to represent fire. Rod emerged to represent family relations. Veles emerged to represent water and the underworld. Mokosh emerged to represent the Earth.

Some of the gods had offspring of their own, but the main Slavic gods are not blood kin to each other the way the Greek and Egyptian gods were.

Perun in the Modern World

Although the ancient Slavic religions have long since blended into other traditions and beliefs, the figure of Perun continues to inspire cultural and literary works, symbolizing the enduring power of nature an the human spirit’s quest for justice and order.

Perun’s tales are but one chapter in the rich tapestry of Slavic mythology. To delve deeper into these ancient stories and explore the legends of gods, heroes, and mythical creatures, please consider joining my free Reader’s Club. Enter your email, and you will receive monthly updates on my writing progress, book reviews, and new entries in my “Slavid Spirits” series. New Reader’s Club members will also receive a free short story as a thank you gift.

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A Celestial Birthday: The 2024 Great American Eclipse

April 21, 2024JournalE.S.O. Martin

This year’s vacation was truly a journey under the stars. As a family, we ventured from the San Francisco Bay Area to Uvalde, Texas, to witness the Great American Eclipse at the Neuces River RV Resort—a magical experience that coincided with my birthday on April 8th!

We had been lucky enough to see the previous total eclipse in 2017 in Oregon, but our son was a bit too young to remember that one. He will definitely remember this one!

This year, despite the partly cloudy skies, we had a wonderful view of the eclipse. Just as totality approached, the clouds parted, revealing the mesmerizing sight of a “double-diamond” eclipse—a rare phenomenon where sunlight sparkles through lunar valleys.

The world around us plunged into twilight; the temperature dropped, and the crowd erupted into cheers and wolf-howls. For nearly four magical minutes, we were enveloped in darkness, witnessing what felt like a cosmic miracle.

Celebrating my birthday under such circumstances was extraordinary. I joked with my husband that he was the ultimate romantic for having brought me both the sun and the moon on my birthday. But this family trip together was truly a gift beyond compare.

The rest of our journey was a lot of fun, even though it involved many days of intense driving. In two weeks we drove for more than 60 hours and covered more than 3,800 miles in the car. Our route took us down to Morro Bay, where we got to see a SpaceX rocket launch. From there, we went east to spend a couple days at the Grand Canyon, then to Texas. On our return trip, we visited Pismo Beach.

When I was a kid, my family did a lot of road trips, and one of the highlights of long car rides for me is getting to listen to audiobooks. It was really fun to get to share that joy with my husband and son.

Together, we delved into Bill Bryson’s A Short History of Nearly Everything, which is a humorous non-fiction book about science. Our family loves science and we love humor, so this was a perfect fit for us. It was the perfect book to listen to while contemplating the geological history of the desert of the American Southwest, and the miracle of cosmic bodies migrating across the heavens. Bill Bryson does such a good job capturing the human stories behind scientific discoveries.

My husband and I also enjoyed listening to several of Tony Hillerman’s Leaphorn & Chee novels as we drove across the desert. This was the perfect set of books to listen to, as we drove past many of the landmarks mentioned in the books. We listened to The Blessing Way, Dance Hall of the Dead and People of Darkness. Hillerman’s books are more than just mysteries; they paint vivid pictures of the Navajo Nation and the Southwestern landscape. His writing brings to life the region’s magic and nature, enhancing our journey with stories as compelling as the landscapes themselves.

Reflecting on this trip, it’s the shared experiences and discoveries that stand out—the cosmic dance of an eclipse, the stories of land and sky, and the laughter and wonder our family shared. Each mile brought us closer in ways that only a cross-country road trip could.

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Book Review: The Storyteller by Jodi Picoult

April 20, 2024Journal, Reviews, PolishE.S.O. Martin

Jodi Picoult’s The Storyteller weaves a complex tapestry of narratives that delve into the depths of human guilt, redemption, and the enduring impact of historical atrocities on personal identities and familial legacies. Through the intertwining lives of Sage Singer, a baker grappling with the loss of her mother, Josef Weber, an elderly man with a dark secret, and Malinka, a Holocaust survivor, Picoult challenges the reader to confront the uncomfortable moral ambiguities of justice and forgiveness.

Interwoven Narratives:

At the heart of the novel is Sage Singer, who, while trying to navigate her own sea of grief and guilt, encounters Josef Weber, a beloved community figure with a hidden past as a Nazi commander. This revelation sets off a moral quandary for Sage, whose Jewish heritage and familial connections to the Holocaust, through her grandmother Malinka—a survivor of Auschwitz—deepens the narrative’s exploration of historical memory and its implications for the present.

Malinka’s storyline provides a harrowing glimpse into the Holocaust’s dehumanizing brutality, capturing the desperation, resilience, and the indomitable will to survive amidst unthinkable horrors. Her stories, particularly the haunting dark fantasy tale she composed during her imprisonment, serve as a testament to the power of storytelling as a means of endurance and escape from the grim reality of the concentration camps.

Themes of Endurance and the Power of Storytelling:

Picoult masterfully uses the motif of storytelling as a form of resistance against the erasure of history and the diminishment of human suffering. Malinka’s fantastical horror story, set in a Polish village plagued by mysterious disappearances and vampiric entities, not only provides a stark contrast to the real-life terror of Auschwitz but also underscores the vital role of imagination as a sanctuary from pain.

The novel’s exploration of the complexities of survivorship—highlighting the roles of luck, endurance, guilt, and the human capacity for both cruelty and kindness—resonates deeply with those familiar with the lasting scars of historical traumas. Malinka’s role as storyteller shows that stories serve a crucial function in offering temporary respite from pain. This is a nuanced perspective on the value of literature and art in coping with grief and trauma.

Personal Reflections:

This book had personal significance for me, because both my grandmother and great-grandmother survived the horrors of Auschwitz. The Storyteller acknowledges the generational pain, and the cathartic power of storytelling in processing and understanding trauma.

The Storyteller is not just a novel; it’s an invitation to reflect on the multifaceted nature of humanity and the indelible impact of our histories on our present selves.

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The Tragedy of Jarilo and Marzanna: A Tale of Seasons and Sacrifice

April 13, 2024Journal, Slavic Spirits (series)E.S.O. Martin

One of the most important seasonal myths in Slavic lore is of the tragic love story of Jarilo and Marzanna, twins who were separated at birth, who later fell in love and married, and then were separated by death. The story of Jarilo and Marzanna stands as a poignant narrative that explores themes of love, betrayal, and the cyclical nature of life and death. This story, deeply rooted in the cultural and agricultural practices of the Slavic peoples, not only explains the turning of the seasons but also delves into the complexities of human emotions and cosmic balance.

Divine Origins and Celestial Upbringing

The goddess Mokosh with her twins, Jarilo and Marzanna. To broke peace, Jarilo and Marzanna were separated and each raised by the other’s father.

Jarilo and Marzanna, the twin children of the earth goddess Mokosh, were born under unique circumstances. Their conception was the result of Mokosh’s union with two powerful deities: Perun, the god of the sky, and Veles, the god of the underworld. This dual paternity led to a celestial conflict when Perun discovered the twins, prompting a fierce battle against Veles, symbolized by a tumultuous storm of lightning and thunder.

To restore peace, Mokosh intervened, proposing a solution where each god would raise the other’s child. Veles took Jarilo to Nawia, the land at the roots of the World Tree, fostering him with love and affection. Conversely, Perun raised Marzanna in Prawia, at the crown of the World Tree, with fairness but reserved warmth due to her constant reminder of Veles.

Spring: A Fateful Meeting and a Love Born

Jarilo, god of spring, summer, agriculture, and war. He is often pictured riding a white horse.

Separated since birth and raised apart, the twins met for the first time in Yawia, the land of the living, as young deities appointed to perform their divine duties. Unaware of their sibling connection, they fell deeply in love. Their union symbolized the perfect harmony between action, represented by Jarilo, and intuition, embodied by Marzanna. Their passionate relationship celebrated during the spring equinox and culminated in marriage on Kupala Night, the summer solstice.

Summer: Kupala Night and the Rites of Marriage

Jarilo and Marzanna marry on Kupula night, the summer solstice

Kupala Night was a significant event for the Slavs, a time when communal festivities allowed young couples to engage in courtship rituals, including communal bathing and jumping over bonfires. It was a night when arrangements could be set aside, and love could dictate one’s choice in partnership. Jarilo and Marzanna’s wedding was a grand celebration of their love, intertwining their destinies with the agricultural cycle of the community.

Autumnal: Tragedy Strikes with the Harvest

The tale takes a somber turn with the arrival of autumn. Marzanna, discovering Jarilo’s infidelity, was overcome with rage and sorrow. In her anguish, she killed Jarilo with a scythe, his blood nourishing the fields and marking the beginning of the harvest. This act, while violent, was deeply symbolic, representing the necessary sacrifice for life to continue, ensuring that the community would have food to sustain them through the winter.

Winter: Marzanna’s Transformation and the Season of Darkness

Marzanna, goddess of winter, illness, death, witchcraft

The death of Jarilo plunged the world into darkness and cold, reflecting Marzanna’s grief and transformation into a formidable goddess of winter, blight, and illness. She roamed the snowy landscapes, a figure of sorrow and vengeance, feared for her powers over death and the supernatural.

Rebirth and the Cycle Continues

Straw effigy for the Drowning of the Marzanna, signaling the end of winter

Each spring, a ceremony known as the Drowning of Marzanna took place. Villagers would create an effigy of Marzanna, parading it through the streets to absorb the winter’s hardships, then burn and drown it in a river, symbolically sending Marzanna back to Nawia. This ritual paved the way for the rebirth of both Jarilo and Marzanna, allowing the cycle of seasons, love, and life to begin anew.

Marzanna, traveling through the river to the land of Naw, to be reborn in the spring to begin the cycle anew

Enduring Legacy

The tragedy of Jarilo and Marzanna resonates beyond its mythological origins, reflecting the Slavic understanding of the natural world’s rhythms and the human condition’s emotional depths. It teaches lessons about the balance of life and death, the power of love and loss, and the eternal hope of renewal—themes that continue to inspire and resonate through generations.

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Book Review: Doll Bones by Holly Black

April 6, 2024Journal, ReviewsE.S.O. Martin

The Last Adventure: Tackling the Threshold of Adulthood in ‘Doll Bones’

In the enchanting realm of middle-grade literature, Holly Black’s Doll Bones emerges as a hauntingly beautiful narrative that transcends the boundaries of imagination and reality. This Newbery Award-winning novel is a testament to the bittersweet journey of growing up, told through the eyes of three inseparable friends: Zach, Poppy, and Alice.

The Heart of Childhood Adventures:

Zach, Poppy, and Alice have shared countless adventures, animating their toys and action figures with rich, fantastical stories. But as the cusp of adolescence looms, their friendship faces the inevitable tides of change. Zach grapples with his father’s expectations to abandon child’s play, Alice confronts the bewildering changes of puberty, and Poppy fears losing her friends and being left behind.

A Haunting Quest:

The narrative takes a compelling turn when Poppy reveals that a porcelain doll, locked away in her home, whispers of its haunted past. This revelation sets the trio on an unexpected journey, a final adventure that weaves the threads of friendship with the eerie lore of the doll’s ghostly origins. Their quest to unravel the mystery of a girl’s disappearance and to lay the doll’s spirit to rest is as much about confronting their personal demons as it is about solving the enigma.

A Creepy, Captivating Tale:

Doll Bones strikes a perfect balance between the eerie and the profound, making it a page-turning read for middle graders and adults alike. Holly Black’s mastery in crafting a story that is creepy yet not overly graphic is commendable. The novel delves deep into the essence of friendship, the pain of letting go, and the courage to step into the unknown.

The characters, with their distinct fears and dreams, are brought to life with such empathy and depth that readers of all ages will find echoes of their own childhoods within these pages.

Doll Bones is more than a story; it’s a reflection on the thresholds we cross from childhood to adolescence, marked by the relics of our innocence and the strength we muster to face the unknown. Holly Black has indeed woven a tapestry rich with the hues of nostalgia, friendship, and the thrilling chill of a ghostly tale.

For those enchanted by the allure of Doll Bones and the exploration of friendships tinged with the supernatural, I invite you to join my Reader’s Club newsletter. Dive deeper into the world of enchanting reads, stay updated on my works in progress, and explore the Slavic Spirits series, where I unravel the myths and legends of the Slavs. Let’s embark on this journey of storytelling together, where magic knows no bounds, and every tale is a doorway to a new adventure.

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